Musical Mayhem: The Fight for A New State Song

As promised in the comments below, here is a set of proposed lyrics for the song "Shenandoah," to make the song more Virginia-centric.

Oh, Shenandoah,
I hear you calling.
To the heart of all your people.
Oh, Shenandoah,
I hear you calling.
And I pause, and think of home,
In my dear Virginia.

Oh, mountains tall,
I see your splendor.
And my heart soars like your summits.
Oh, mountains tall,
I see your splendor.
And I pause, and think of home,
In my dear Virginia.

Oh, rolling wave,
I taste your sea spray.
Old as time, yet ever changing.
Oh, rolling wave,
I taste your sea spray.
And I pause, and think of home,
In my dear Virginia.

Oh, brother mine,
My hand I offer.
Stand with me and be my neighbor.
Oh, sister mine,
My hand I offer.
And I pause, and think of home,
In my dear Virginia.

Very beautiful, although I think it's missing something. It just seems to me it doesn't take in the whole breadth of Virginia's people and culture. Who could be left out.........I KNOW! Here's my suggestion for a final verse.

Oh, 95
Cars snarled in traffic
Standing still, there on your asphalt
Oh, 95
I long to drive home
Away, so far away
Out to west Loudoun

There we go.